Steve Williams – author / Exodus





		Would you like to write a review of the first Chapter of Exodus? All comments are welcome and I will add as many reviews as I can. Click here to submit your review. Please note that all reviews will be edited to ensure the content is appropriate but where possible I will keep the editing to a minimum. Please include your first name and location (eg: Dave from Glasgow) on your e mail. Submissions without this detail will not be entered on the site. Thank you ------------------ I just had to send you this mail to say that I have just finished reading your chapter and I have to say it was BRILLIANT!!! I am sure you will be a great success and I cannot wait to read the whole thing. Catherine - Wellingborough ------------------ Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read the first chapter of Exodus. Have to say I am hooked. In fact really quite impressed! I have read the reviews that you have posted for Exodus and it would appear that I will not be the only person who is disappointed to not read further. In fact I was wondering if there was any way that you would allow me to read the rest of the book. I know this will probably not take up too much time as I read the first chapter in the time it took to travel home on the train yesterday! Told you I was hooked. Well done and I really hope that you find a publisher soon. You definitely have a best seller there!! Ian - London ------------------ WOW I have just finished reading chapter 1 of Exodus and I would just like to say it was amazing, a truly compelling read, its not very often you come across a book that you feel that you are actually there, feeling all the emotions that the characters are feeling, you must be really proud of yourself Steve... make sure you keep up the good work. I will continue to read your short stories now! Wendy - Tring ------------------ Just read the first chapter of your book, very, very good. Hope it gets published soon, read the reviews people seem to really like it. Kevin - London ------------------ The first chapter of this book had me reading faster than I can ever remember. I was totally focussed and absorbed into the feelings of Jennings and what must now be going through his mind. I'm sure that the rest of this book will have it's readers asking many questions of their own feelings... Deep - Bromley ------------------ Promising stuff……and now I, like many others I’m sure, would like to read more……they say there’s a novel in everyone, but it’s the rare few that take the opportunity to realise their potential………so best wishes for the future…………… Matt & Kate - Dartford ----------------- A truly gripping start to what must surely be a terrific read. The desperate need of a father to see justice done after a cruel and heartless crime will ensure anyone who reads this novel experiences emotions that stay with them for some time. I can’t wait for the day when I can get my hands on the rest of the chapters to find out how the story unravels and to join with the main characters and see that justice prevails. A brilliant start from what must surely be a best selling author of the future! Sarah M - Dorset ----------------- What will Mr Jenning's be prepared to do to satisfy his sense of loss and anger? I guess I'll have to read the remainder of 'Exodus' to find out. What a situation to be in. The author clearly knows police procedure inside out and appears to have a very high regard for the uniformed members of the force. The opening chapter of 'Exodus' has raised a huge number of questions, to which I hope the answers will be revealed as the story unfolds. Just who is Mr Jennings? What is his first name? Where does he live? During what time of year has the awful sequence of events taken place? The author teases the reader with these tantalising omissions. I wish him every success. Julian - Bromley ----------------- I read Chapter One on the website and thought it was very good. I wanted to read the next chapter to find out what happens next. When does Rhys Davies appear? It's obvious that you know police procedure and jargon very well. You obviously have a way with words, and I really liked your descriptive paragraphs. Congratulations. Tricia - Orpington ------------------ Speaking as a police officer, it is readily apparent that you are either a serving officer yourself or you have undertaken an unprecedented amount of research prior to writing this. It is good to finally read a crime novel that shows the reality of police work and procedures, rather than the myriad of bestsellers that take convenient liberties for dramatic effect whenever it suits. I sincerely hope this work finds a publisher as I'd be very keen to read the remainder. Who knows, maybe other authors would then start to strive for a little more realism? John - London ------------------ Edge of your seat stuff. Good use of your life experiences when describing the finer points ie the removing of the dead body by undertakers after the hanging. I can not wait to read the rest of the book. Paul - Beckenham ------------------ An intriguing start to what promises to be a thriller written with a knowledge of Police procedure but without unnecessary jargon. The feelings of a parent both hurt and bewildered build up to an understandable anger at losing a precious child and the need for justice to be done at whatever cost. However innocent parents are when a child is lost for whatever reason there is always a feeling of guilt when the natural order of death (the old first, the young later) is interrupted by an unnatural event like murder. The first chapter gripped my imagination and made me want to read on to the conclusion which I felt would be a bloody outcome appealing to the natural justice in many of us. Perhaps we all have a dark side which could be triggered by feelings of loss of a loved one. I look forward to reading the rest of this story and more to follow. Alan - Bromley ------------------